C-A-P-I-T-A-L Screenwriter Pre-Production Journal

Summary

My scriptwriting process is mostly typical, I had my initial idea and fleshed it out over the course of a week. I knew the overall sequence of events, but to make my script true to the comedy genre I tried to make my characters react in ways that are unexpected.

Cinematic Elements:

  1. Pacing (26)
  2. Contrast of Time (27)
  3. Fast Motion (30)
  4. Freeze Frame (33)

Drafts of Script

Draft 1

Draft 2

My co-writer, Charlie, edited my first draft of the script. He made minimal changes that mostly concerned practicality and simplicity. Our script is more of a guide because our dialogue is able to be improvised, similar to other films in the genre.

Characterization Development

Our film revolves around our main character, an eccentric speller that is characterized almost immediately by their dialogue and energy. Through her spelling and unbelievable stories just on the first page, we know that she is a unique personality.

Influences from Movies

American Movie (Chris Smith) – Has an eccentric subject that is overly committed to their craft

The Office (Novak, Kaling, Schur, Wilson, Daniels) – Same as before + mundane environment, documentary style, almost universally comedic because of it’s absurdidty

Parks and Rec (Schur, Daniels, Pohler, Offerman) – Similar to the office, but in my opinion better

Best in Show (Guest, Levy) – Centers silly competition, dog show and spelling are both comedic in their absurdity

Napoleon Dynamite (Scarpa) – Makes something boring comedic, and attaches us to the quirky characters

Pitch

Treatment

Included in above post

Costume/Props that Help Characterization

The tri-fold board that the main character utilizes shows their commitment to persuading the judge, as they will go as far as to make a visual aid.

What I Learned

Through the Pre-Production process, I learned how much needs to be done in a team to properly prepare us to make a good film, and how important it is to use that time well. A problem that we solved was getting a supervisor for when we need to film outside of the classroom, we picked a staff member that we all like and who is willing to be in those locations with us.

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